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31-Aug-2005

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Shohin azalea display

This was a display i put up at a recent show,i'm not in love with the stand,it's too geometric to properly display bonsai,but it's all i have.I also wondered about a scoll,but this would have made a even number of elements, and there was the usual push for space.The theme was a gentle hill side pine, rolling down through the park land type of tree, through to a garden,did it work? Could have been better,i would have preferred 3 trees 2 accents,but my other one i intended to use did'nt look in show condition,so it had to be 2 trees 3 accents

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The weight of the image seems to be in the top right corner. I played with the image to create what I felt was a little better balanced image. What do you think?

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Personally I thought the original had a good visual triangle going for it as to weight. The revision I thought was a little strained. Iam sure others know better than I ,But does it seem strange that the tree would be in the accent position?? I too am just learning.
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