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bonsaiTALK Craftsman
Join Date: Nov-2001
Posts: 95
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ilex verticillata literati
An ilex verticillata literati in late summer.
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I'd rather be fishing.
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Nice trunk line, but it does sort of just look like a ball of leaves at the top. Here's my suggestion for a re-worked top.
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bonsaiTALK Craftsman
Join Date: Nov-2001
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Thanks for the virtual. I agree, it looks like a ball of leaves and something should be done.
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The Cat's Apprentice
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Humbly submitted
Mr. Truck:
I would humbly suggest that your current presentation obscures the best part of this tree. IMHO, the wiggles in the trunk at the base are this tree's strongest feature. In your current presentation, this feature is obscured by a mound of soil and by extraneous foliage that does not add to the value of the tree. I'm not sure what the lower branches are up to, design-wise, but they hide the best asset. I would also suggest that the image would be more powerful if the trunk was a lot shorter. If you can cut it back and get it to back-bud, I would go for an image something like the attached virt, with an emphasis on creating more defined branches with a drooping look to show age, rather than the "ball" approach. FWIW pootsie |
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bonsaiTALK Craftsman
Join Date: Nov-2001
Posts: 95
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Thanks for this input, Pootsie.
I think you are right, that the best parts of the tree are not coming out, but the question is how to get that done. While I think my photo is good, the tree is very difficult to capture. For one thing, it is 43.5" above the GROUND...not wide, but high. For another thing, from the pot, the trunk of the tree moves over 2 feet towards the viewer, so in the image, the tree is considerably foreshortened. It is very dramatic, but doesn't fit into the usual bonsai display situation. I have already shortened the trunk a foot and a half. I expected back budding, but got none below the point where it is now. The foliage at the base is actually 2 very small trunks. There used to be another trunk, almost as big as the remaining tree. I worked for 2 years to integrate it, but finally, it got chopped. The positioning was just too awkward. I may remove those two small trunks, which are suckers that appeared after the other main trunk was chopped. I don't know yet. Another problem with the photo is that it doesn't show the mound of soil is actually roots. They are covered, for the most part, with a very thin layer of soil. I can probably reduce the root ball over time, but as it is, some very nice, heavy roots are developing. Having said that, I like your image very much. I'm open to suggestions as to how I can do that with what I have. One other thing--wiring doesn't work well. For a year, I had the trunk wired to fold back on itself, thus shortening it. When I removed the wire, it was back to its current position in two weeks. That, and the wood is extremely brittle. Thanks, again, for all input. I appreciate the time it takes to do virtuals. |
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