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Old 27-Nov-2007   #1
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Red Leaf California juniper

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This is my favorite tree in training. Its base and height are about 15 cm and 60cm respectively. The right picture is its front and the left one is its left side. Any idea is appreciated. Bonhe
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Old 27-Nov-2007   #2
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bonhe - hmmm I'd say send it to me and i will study it for a while, maybe a few changes here and there.

Nice trunk, I would at least reduce considerably the walrus tusk jins, and possibly the top back to the mid level, that top section seems too long and straight.
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Old 27-Nov-2007   #3
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Definitely a nice tree...seems very healthy. Hard to say from those two pics, but I'm inclined to say your first pic has a more attractive trunk line, and those jins look way too big with the front you picked. My 2 cents. Good luck with it.


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Old 27-Nov-2007   #4
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very nice potential there take it slow think 3 times b4 you cut anything.i gotta agree with dave on the front. and there i see the tree in the lower half of it.
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Old 27-Nov-2007   #5
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This tree is in the wrong part of the forum... it's VERY lovely and should be in a place where it will get enough traffic to be appreciated. Maybe FlyBri or someone could teleport it...


That being said... I have to echo the others opinions... I've got such an itch to take a die grinder/dremel to those jins it's positively killin me... lol

I do hope you'll post progress shots on your work... but do it in show and tell...

How long have you had it?


It's obviously happy.... well done.



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Maybe if you brought down the crown a bit it would tighten up the whole picture - make it much more solid. Great material. Good Luck.
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Thanks for all comments.

I agree with Bill and Chadguay that its top is high with straight and long trunk. I'm planning to bring it down soon.

Dave, Jins are big, but I have to think many many times before I decide to reduce them as Ms. Vic does.

Ms. Vic, I got this tree from my friend for 6 months. Surely its foliage has been growing healthy. I will post progression of my work in the future. Bonhe
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Wow what a nice Cali juniper Bonhe! I agree with people here too. You most likely won't need the top part in the final design, but keep it for now because you need to thicken up the lifeline as much as possible and for as long as possible, unless you want to keep it for some really wild literati design. Your design options are limitless with this tree!
Now you need to uncover another inch or 2 of the soil to show the root flare. These junipers don't tend to have any good nebari anyway, but this is a collected specimen so you might have another curve to work with right below the soil line. You can't really decide on a front until you see that base a little more. And please include some more pics of the other 2 sides too will ya.
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Thanks for all comments.


Dave, Jins are big, but I have to think many many times before I decide to reduce them as Ms. Vic does.

I agree completely! I have a very old Rocky mountain juniper that is mostly natural deadwood, and some would say reducing the deadwood would improve its quality. However, once the jins/shari is carved or reduced, the tree is changed forever, so I'm taking my time, too. Good luck,

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Bonhe,

This is just a suggestion from a novice who's only seen a photo and not the real tree. That said, I might consider not just "bringing down the top a bit" but actually removing that whole branch leading to the apex. It seems a bit thick to me for something so high on the tree, and I think you may have better possibilities with some of the smaller stuff on the left. (Of course, you'll need to further develop and train that area if you do this.)

If you don't like that suggestion, just toss it in the trash. Other than that and what others already said about the jin, I probably wouldn't change much at the moment. It's a beautiful tree.
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