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Dances With Trees
Join Date: Jul-2004
Location: Lake County California
Country: USA
Posts: 573
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excellent step by step demo.
To me, the large, horizontal stub of the main branch you removed is jarring to my eye. It stops the flow up the trunk. In this VERY ROUGH virt I reduced it quite a bit. What do you think?
- bob
edit - on further looking at the pics, I guess the foliage pad above the branch I removed would need to go, as well, since it comes out further along that branch.
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