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This is a cool idea.

weak points, the very visible branch on the right side, above the first mass of foliage on the right side, clashes lines with the branch opposite it on the left. the branch on the right comes off almost horizontal, on the left however is a much sharper angle. i would bring that down to match the right side more.

the apex, or canopy is kinda pinwheelish and the trunk just seems to stop, instead of somehow flowing, or blending into twigs with foliage.

very strong nebari, and i like the moss, it goes well with the bark texture and matches with the foliage color in that it add a different flavor of green to the mix, which also works well with the bark color.

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10-Mar-2005	#2
crabs bonsaiTALK Craftsman Join Date: Dec-2004 Location: OH, cincy Country: us USDA Zone: 6 ish AHS Heat Zone: 7 Posts: 52	This is a cool idea. weak points, the very visible branch on the right side, above the first mass of foliage on the right side, clashes lines with the branch opposite it on the left. the branch on the right comes off almost horizontal, on the left however is a much sharper angle. i would bring that down to match the right side more. the apex, or canopy is kinda pinwheelish and the trunk just seems to stop, instead of somehow flowing, or blending into twigs with foliage. very strong nebari, and i like the moss, it goes well with the bark texture and matches with the foliage color in that it add a different flavor of green to the mix, which also works well with the bark color. crabs><>