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Old 6-Oct-2004   #4
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Interesting...Composition is ok...but spoiled by the shorter tree having a trunk twice as large as the taller tree. I would try to hide some girth of that trunk behind the edge of the stone.

I have a lead on marble trays, which would really help with all these penjings you are cranking out. The last one you did with the huge lipped pot and this pot do nothing for these landscapes.

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