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bonsaiTALK Master
Join Date: Jul-2003
Location: North Yorkshire
Country: England
Posts: 448
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HI Jonathan, I think you've done a great job here to sart off with, particulalry from what you started with.
I'm going to disagree with Attila (Sorry Attila I don't normally) on a few things though. are you planning to work on the jin? It looks like you are from the photo, with some work and shortening it could be quite nice. I certainly wouldn't get rid of it. I'm not sure if I would consider this slanting style probably some where between slanting and infomal. However I do agree that the movement should be toward the left. consequently i'm not so sure about the branch toward the right, I find it a little distracting.
By the way I like the pot! Who's that by?
Cheers Jonny.
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