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Attila Soos
Join Date: Jan-2002
Location: Los Angeles, California
Country: USA
Posts: 2,003
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Hi Jonathan,
This is a good start for a slanting style. Right off the bat, I would get rid of the jin. It is too straight and uneventful. I would keep on building the trunk-line until the tree doubles its current size.
IMO the direction should continue towards the left, I would hate to see it reverting towards the center of the pot.
Initially I thought that this is a hopeless job. The only good news is that a larch can bud pretty much from everywhere (note: my larches are VERY reluctand to bud from wood that is over 5-7 years old, so budding from branches of the above mentioned age is unreliable).
My comment on the price is that whether is $10, $20, $30, it makes no difference: It is the time that you will spend on this tree during the next 10 years what matters. That's where the real cost is (it's called opportunity cost; if you have an MBA or CPA, sorry). Keep that in mind.
As it stands, I think it's a good start and may be worth the effort.
Regards,
Attila
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