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Old 6-Apr-2004   #3
David Chauvin
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It still needs tweaking and after it fills in, work on the positive and negative spaces. A repotting wouldn't hurt either, burying it a little deeper centering in the pot. I think the line is much better and the nice structure of the apex more visible. Any comments, critiques and virtuals are welcomed.

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David
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