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bonsaiTALK Master Craftsman
Join Date: Mar-2002
Location: Laplace,LA
Country: USA
Posts: 703
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Mike,
The two branches don't bother me, but they cross in a distracting sort of way. Try separating the cascade lines and I think it will flow better.
Best Regards,
David
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