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bonsaiTALK Master
Join Date: Feb-2005
Location: NW Oregon
Country: USA
Posts: 349
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Hi Pat,
I think the lower trunk is excellent all the way until it gets to where I have colored red. That section to me totally distracts my eye from the wonderful lower section of the trunk. I would bend that section to the right to continue the trunks movement or at the very least cover it with a branch to hide it.
Other than that ~ nice start!
Jason
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