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bonsaiTALK ArchMaster
Join Date: Jul-2004
Location: AR
Posts: 2,897
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I like the tree, only change I can see that I would make would be the same style/color of pot only alot wider and half as tall. Seeing how the tree is riding high in the current pot i assume this probablly isn't possible. After the pot I would hope the foliage would be able to fill in more, not completley but a bit more..25%..and put a little more movemnt into the branches making up the crown.
Ok, looking again the relationship of the first 2 right side branches is bothersome.At least in the photo one would have to go or the bottom one lowered to reveal it's form and lines. thrid branch on the right side is a little boring in close to the trunk, I just don't like the lack of movment in it, if it could be wired to add more flow to it's line that would help aswell.
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