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Old 24-Mar-2008   #18
froufrou
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Join Date: Feb-2008
Location: Lafayette, Indiana
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I think the line that divides the live and dead wood is not natural. That may be what is causing the deadwood to look overpowering.

The line should curve right to left, not abruptly angled.

Some tweaking should fix that.

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