Hello Greg............ If this were my tree I would progress with the former right hand branch back to its original position on the right. This would give me greater possibilities of taking care of the negative space in a better way. The other branch, I would delete completely. I like the curve of the trunk and think a shortening of the jinned top would be appropriate. These are of course only my thoughts and I do enjoy your work so it really is your decision.
Ash
