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bonsaiTALK Master Craftsman
Join Date: Nov-2004
Location: Apeldoorn
Country: Netherlands
Posts: 824
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This will be a good bonsai one day, but.....
My eyes don't like the jins on the left, both of them should go.
The right jin should be made a little smaller, than it will be ok.
The shari on front wasn't really neccesery, but does at some to the overall picture.
For me mostly the top is too heavy, I would make ik more "flytrough" as Walter would say. It really doesn't look like a Walter Pall tree to me.
Please Al give us some more info on this tree,
W.
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