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Originally Posted by bonsaial1
Well obviously the dark hollow in the trunk is a focal point, but to me the larger focal point is the branch that does not seem to fit the rest of the bonsai image. The branch seems out of place with the rest of the lines of the tree. Granted it is a good job of drawing, but maybe a poor job at designing. Of course thats an objective opinion.
nice topic....
Happy New year, Al
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The hollow is supposed to be the focal point in the illustration. That is, as you said, the obvious.
Just curious though, just exactly what makes that lower left branch such a bad thing.
Why should it be changed. There must be a reason that the design is, as you put it, bad. What design element did it violate.