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Greybeard
Join Date: Aug-2001
Location: Fresno, CA
Country: USA
Posts: 5,247
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Well obviously the dark hollow in the trunk is a focal point, but to me the larger focal point is the branch that does not seem to fit the rest of the bonsai image. The branch seems out of place with the rest of the lines of the tree. Granted it is a good job of drawing, but maybe a poor job at designing. Of course thats an objective opinion.
nice topic....
Happy New year, Al
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