Thread: Shohin Juniper
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Old 20-Sep-2002   #3
juliet-of-oz
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Nice little juniper, i did a quick virtual, sorry for the quality.

I think you need to get a bit more of a bend in the trunk line. Also the branch coming from the inside arch of the lowest curve has to go, it is alos a bar branch for the lowest outside one.

i cant tell if you have any back branches, but id suggest swinging the third one back there to fill in area...

Jls
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