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bonsaiTALK Adept
Join Date: Dec-2005
Country: USA
Posts: 227
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Oh, wow. You're right - that sucks. How could you post that? Winky dude should go here - I can't figure out how to make it work. Feel free to beat me up on this one...
I am of course just kidding. I think that you are off to a good start. In fact, I have never done a forest, so you are off to a much better start than I could ever muster...
To my untrained eye, my first thought was that you did not have nearly enough trees on the slab - they are evenly spaced and spread out - and it looks out of scale. Furter, they appear to be too symetrically placed on the slab.
I think that if you had 3x the number of trees - in a variety of sizes - and did groupings of them instead of spacing them on this large slab, you would be headed the direction you had envisioned (a guess).
Good luck - keep us posted. Again, I ain't the forest guru, so I am curious what those with more experience can teach us.
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