CScott

The length of "C" seems a little too short, but "A" is a bit too elongated. How about splitting the difference and shorten back one more branch on "A". The "B" photo shows how critical that first branch is. Without it the trunk looks boring and too long. I enjoy the overall look and drama of the tree. There need to more good cascade bonsai out there so they don't get such a bum rap. They are as hard to create as a bunjin.

Carmen