TreeBay

I think you should try to minimize the horizontal and vertical lengths. There is a strong horizontal followed by a strong vertical, and if you can break those up into diagonals or curves, I'm sure you'd have more energy in the design.

You could probably also lose the top couple inches. You have good roots on this side.

Regards,

Matt

P.S. If you are a US mailman, I hope you are enjoying your day off!

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