Hi Spooky,
Well don, much better!
But if i may give some advice on the future styling.
If you look at the poor virtual i made , you will see that in your design when your eyes folow the trunk movement , they are drawn to the top left, away from the rest of the composition. It is better to led the trunk movement leens more to the direction of the cascading branche, so that the eye direction goes first up and then falls down the cascading branche, from foliage layer to the next foliage layer all the way down, like water would do. This will not only make the bonsai look more naturale, it will allso be a more eye pleasing composition.
For the rest i am sure you will do nicely, seeing what you have don so fare with this tree!
Keep us posted,
Best regards,
Hans van Meer.
