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Much better,...I like your vision, that said I would change ONE lil thing ,and not much at that,...the apex seems to feel as if it is leaning a bit too much back from the cascading branch/trunk it somehow just doesn't "feel" right. I hate giving advice as I'm just a beginner,...but I really think that in this case if you were pull that apex just a bit to the right more or less over the area between the trunk base and the cascading bit, it would sit alot better with the visual balance of this tree. But hey man ,your tree ,you made it so much better already so if what you have in mind is not congruent with my oppinion ,please do not hessitate in telling me \, or anyone else who doesn't like to "bugger off" and i'm in buggerin' mode. Nice tree though man really.

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