soonami

I think John is right on in that the overall shape of the tree is too broad, it is too wide for the trunk of it's size. The spread of the canopy seems so wide to me that it should tip over, in John's virt, the balance is better, and the simple touch of nebari makes so much difference, so that might be it too. I like Andrews assertion that there was too little foliage in the middle but in his virt there is perhaps too much, I like the movement in the branches and would like to see some more of it instead of so many leaves